All Comments on 'Running in Circles Ch. 01'

I thought you did great for your first chapter. I smiled a lot when I read it. It's been awhile since I've come across a story like this. I look forward to reading more. I also like how you throw Spanish in there. Alton doesn't even know what novio means....or does he? :)

Can't wait for the next one.

TM

They're both so adorable! Loved it and can't wait to read more.

I loved it and gave you five Stars.

There were just minor Typos here and there but nothing Major.

It was so refreshing to read.

Please update soon ;)

I really appreciate the positive feedback so far, guys. It looks like I'll be needing a new editor for the rest of the series, if anyone would like to volunteer!

Also, Tom7Jerry, he doesn't know yet, but he'll find out!

I like it, but I thought the sub/dom stuff came hella early. As I read this, I was thinking this could be the start of an abusive relationship. Alton said Alex doesn't know him well, and he's right. Isn't it early to be ordering him around? And maybe I'm 87 years old, but shit, high schoolers are into D/S? They'll be burnt out by age 30! LOL

Please don't make Alex a rough guy -- he can be tender and loving. I imagine him with a bit of dark hair for that muscular chest. He chest feels so strong for Alton. Let Alton have the joy of exploring Alex!

Awesome start, can't wait for the next chapter.

Off to a good start, just hope Alex will not become to domineering. He also needs to be the tender teacher.

I really enjoyed the slow build up of this story. It was not the bang, bang, gone story like so many on here.

The characters and story flows very well..those who aren't familiar with Hispanic males don't know that they can be very aggressive and are naturally macho (from my experiences in NY/NJ and Cali)..like how Alex came to Alton's rescue at that party. And thank you for not making Meera an overbearing female friend to a gay guy! I'm a woman but find those types hella annoying!! I'm interested in seeing where this story leads to in future chapters.

Please update soon.