All Comments on 'Running into Bed'

Firstly, why are you putting xxxxxx in for the places, names etc. it's a story so have you not got any imagination that you can't make up any place names? Doesn't make any sense. When do you ever read a story that has anything like this?

You really need an editor and someone to go over your grammar and writing issues

Don't put xxxxx,, this is fiction, make something up. PLEASE

That was a very interesting story to read.

please get an editor.