All Comments on 'Running Late'

Needs a ton of back story for this to be anything more that someones personal fantasy in print. Still your writing is good technically and hopefully you will continue.

Enough said

This guy let's his wife fuck two niggers and then goes on with their little game playing. Please don't write another story. This one is enough shit for one day.. WIMP, WHORE, SKANK, NIGGER FUCKING SLUT. WANT MORE????

SUCK...

DON'T BOTHER.

So her husband, the man who is supposed to be her best friend, her partner and confident, the guy who is supposed to have her back, is jerking off while she's being raped. Fucking asshat needs to have his rectum rootered considierng he's a fucking queer.

You pathetic piece of dogshit. As for your 'characters'? A whore/slut that wanted to be fucked by the men. It wasn't rape. She gave her consent. As for teh husband? you could not have written a more stupid pathetic asshole of a husband. Juts another sissy boy husband and a sissy boy writer to write about him.

Nicely done. This story was well written and quite erotic. Even the detractors of this story were emotionally affected and likely enjoyed it (if they were honest with themselves) as much as me. So please do continue the story and thanks.

...in this story. Why did you post it. Not one element of this hasn't been done to death.

remember, when you get out of prison you promise to learn to read and write.

fuck the skank up good n slap her round too

The fact that the husband got of on seeign his wife fuck someone else. Sad that the writer had to include two black men in the story. Sad that any woman married or otherwise would find this a turn on. Even as a fantasy it fails. Unless people like nightmares or course which this is.

Nicely done.

Don't let some idiots that don't seem to like this genera of writing get you down. For some reason, these folks read and negatively comment on stories such as these when they would be better off not reading them to begin with.

Go figure!

Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward to the next part of the story.

It does qualify as a story. A story that has been told a hundred times (ninety-six of them better than this one) on this site. Some left out the stereotypes and racial slurs. I was disappointed.

What sick bastard would hide in the restroom listening to 2 guys rape his wife. Oh wait, I know...a sick pussy. Really.

Even a ball point pen can be used as a weapon in such times as he had, so he had no excuse for not helping her.

The story came off showing the husband as a real girly boy wimp. I sure wouldn't want him watching my back for me.

I hope that this story has a better second chapter.

What a turn off, puke.

did not want to "help" the wife being ganed raped in the bathroom; <p>

rather, it is the story of a wife and husband who enjoy having the wife being raped, but BOTH pretending neither knows what's really happening to the other, in a suriptitiously surrendipity, as each times their parallel/concurrent activities carefully... <p>

e.g.: both pretend to be on the phone, talking to each other, seriously, innocently.... while one pretend her/his phone is having trouble, so they'd jus rendezvous at the pre-arranged place; and having one partner, usually the husband, being a bit late, so he could come and catch, at the tale end of it, the wife being molested, raped, or kissed in the dark or in bathroom.... only momentarily coming out, after checking her make up... saying: <p>

"Hi, honey, you're a few minutes late!" "Oh, I am so sorry, but as you know, the traffic was really bad, but I am here now, so let's go do our own things," etc. <p>

The next phase, afterh they're tired of this, is of course to have the manly man tape the wife being mauled and gangraped, screaming the end of the earth is coming but she's okay, since she has orgasm from beginning to end of the "rape"... in some motel, with the guy asking if the wife likes to take a break for some water... with her saying, "Could you, honey, just bring me some bottle, as I am busy here, as you can see... come, be a darling, lay down your camera and give me some water."

Nothing more than junk... truly a waste of time. Agree with the other comments....... nothing more than sickening.

why is it writer that you try to create a simpering weak excuse for a man?<P>

In your likeness is the conclusion of 99.9% of readers - anyone who would spend the time to render the pile of subhuman crap must need negative attention rather than none.<P>

Pretty Sad little sick one.

Bloody boring these examples of trash.

he let's her get raped? if she planned it then fine! but what the hell is this shit!?!

this story is really hot!!!

What kind of sick dick writes this crap. If she planned the attack fine, but it was'nt written as such. It sounds like you would like to be gang raped by a bunch of prisoners.

You are one sick puppy!! he LETS her get raped?

Good thing you crawled back under the fucking rock you came out from and didn't continue this shit

you are one sick fuck!

Fucking disgusting.

Only a limp dick would sit there and let his hot wife get fucked ny two STD mules.

This one should better be in the "non consent/reluctant" section. It's hard to believe that hearing her being beaten hasn't won the excitement. Not really a loving husband, more a perv SOB.

This is a great story. Waiting for more.. .

1star

...when you regard the fact that the only positive reaction this story generates comes from "anonymous"; Goes to show: It takes a cuck to live those stories..(or to write them)

Sounds as both enjoyed

If I had arrived at the bar and my wife was talking to someone I'd approach and say her "name ,sorry I'm late, but I.m here now, would you introduce me to your friends

then we must go to let the baby sitter get away.

I know this is Literotica so my straight forward approach wouldn't be very interesting.

SORRY!

Wow great story . The wife took it like a good little slut

Whorewifes, not hit wife. Cuck, not husband. Not close to a story.

This story is repugnant and the author is a sick cuck pig.

Two weeks later she wakes up with morning sickness. Eventually they find out it twins but two different black fathers. She wants an abortion he says if she does their done. She has the black babies and he makes her announce to the would on her face book site and to the families that she cheated on hubby and is a black cock slut. Soon after she goes on the Norplant birth control and hubby becomes her pimp as she fucks multiple black cocks daily like a good whore including gang bangs. This is her punishment but she begins to like it and until she turns fifty fucks black men and makes her hubby rich as he keeps all the money. When they decide on more kids she goes off the birth control and the pick three black bulls to knock her up over the years. You see hubby can’t have kids of his own so raises his brood as his own. They live happily ever after.

the woman is a typical stupid slut, the husband is a rat turd coward.

Aww anon. As if you could write anything better. But everyone knows your the coward with your idiotic remarks.

Jesus Christ Guys, what's wrong with you, this story was so fucking HOT, My wife at one point in our 41 year Mariage (she passed 4 yrs ago) was almost there. She used to play softball and would go out with her team afterwards and I would encourage her to play around if she wanted. It actually got to the point where she once didn't cum home until 8:30 am, and she was wearing heels and black stockings that were torn and had lots of cum stains from two black guys she went home with (she knew one) and they tag teamed her for 5-6 hours. Usually when she would cum home around 3-4 am and find me sleeping she would quietly climb up on the bed and squat down on my sleeping face, then she would make me guess how many loads I was slurping up and who they were from. It didn't take too many times that she would insist that I place my wrists and ankles into these little nooses made from pairs of her black thigh highs that were tied to the bed. It was pretty sexually exciting because once I secured the fourth one, I was a prisoner in my own bed until she came home. We stopped after a few years and she turned into a different wife, never wanting sex except maybe in the missionary position.

So Dudes, this authors wife sounds like she's pretty fucking kinky, and now that I'm a widow, I want to be her clean up slave!