All Comments on 'Running Out of Time Ch. 01'

by Justanotherdirtyoldman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Im loving your stories so far. Please keep them up.

SlofredSlofredalmost 3 years ago

So now what? alternative reality? I hope you have the next installment ready soon. Thank you for this story, and I wait not so patiently for the rest of the story. 5 stars GREAT START...

JustanotherdirtyoldmanJustanotherdirtyoldmanalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Slofred... Did you read the story to its end? I'm afraid that's the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think with it called chapter 1 some people might think you have more coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

please tell me there's another one, PLEASE

IronnickIronnickalmost 3 years ago

needs a sequel where he humiliates his co-worker during an employee conference

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story so far!!! I'm sad to see the author commented on here recently that this is all there is to the story, because there is an abrupt plot twist in the final paragraph and then the story just stops. I am very very very much hoping it gets finished!

CreeperclawCreeperclawalmost 3 years ago

Wait a minute, was this whole thing some kinda "life flashing before eyes" thing?

I can't tell if that's merciful or cruel.

Also yeah, the chapter 1 in the title makes ya think there might be a sequel.

oureltonoureltonalmost 3 years ago

Love this storyline! 😁

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Just another dirty old man. What else is there to say? I've lurked here for years but now I've decided to try my hand at writing. I write to entertain myself and hopefully you too. I read all comments but will delete purely negative comments that contain no constructive cri...