All Comments on 'RV Travel Companion Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
like it

Keep them coming I like the story line

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Switch it up a bit!

It's getting a bit repetitive. Only the scenery and the players change in a rather predictable fashion. Good story, though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good dtory, but '''

... I think 'LarryinSeattle' needs editing!

He let you down a few times, especially with things like their/there!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting

Well first story based on what I would like to happen with me and my wife but she is just too shy and I think our age has us also but a hot story for sure.

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