All Comments on 'Ryan Ch. 05'

so far so good!

This shaping up to be a great read

Proof read or get someone to do it for you.

I love this story so much!!! Keep it coming. Caroline is not done by a long shot. Some people just don't get it. The reason she lost Ryan was her own doing. She thought Ryan would not get tired of her. Great story, great read. More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

After reading this chapter. :D

Man, how do you have time to write? lol

Ryan definitely need to tell Dani that Caroline is back and about the visit. I hope he plans on taking her to Tony's party.

@MissPrimrose222

I work three days a week with her, but two days a week at home. I write on those two days, mostly. Either working on the finishing touches for my novel, or just some light writing on here.

During the weekend, we read together or go out with friends... or sometimes just stay home and have fun together. ;)

You outdid yourself Ms. Lady. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Sometimes your descriptions seem tedious, random, or ill- placed. However, I still love this story and your characters :-) you've got a lot going for you!

I didn't comment the first time since I was too damn horny afterwards!!! I gave this a 5 and woulda given it more if I could!!!!!

*calls for my sweetie* scuse me peeps ;3

oh man. hopefully she stays calm but i hav a feeling theres going to be some ass kicking later on. love this story. i love how you make your characters come to life. cant wait for the next update.

Obviously a Battle Royale is shaping up...let's roll of the sleeves and get to it without

a long prelude. Why are bitches like that so dismissive of sistahs?

I want to see who is going to fuck this bitch up because she ain't gonna play fair and we all know it!!! I hope Dani mans up in grand style.

Caroline, Ryan is so over you and she will keep pushing and they won't be friends anymore. I hope that Dani doesn't let Caroline ruffle her feathers but what I know for sure is that they will meet at Tony's party. I need an update like right now!!

It looks like Caroline won't take a no from him...it might just have to be from Dank and then followed up by a proposal to Daniel from Ryan. If I were them though I still wouldn't turn my back from crazy Caroline...ever. Anyway I LOVE this story and he characters!! Cant wait til the drama followed by a hot happy ending for Daniel and Ryan. Great writer!

A little better editing wouldn't hurt, but I only say that because you are such a good writer, in general, and capable of even better.

Five.

Thanks for the comment. I did edit this chapter and submitted it a few days ago. Every time I read a chapter I find a better way to do it. I'm learning as I go along and appreciate the patience as I go through this process.

The way Dani and Ryan are bumping and grinding there is sure to be a bun in the oven. As for Caroline, she is a twit. Karen needs to realize she is being played.

MissPrimrose, you sure know how to hook someone. Things are really getting gooood! Caroline, stop being desperate and find a man that will change your mean and manipulative ways!

Dani talking with her little brother about black men dating white women and black women dating white men made me remember that seven out of ten black-white IR relationships are black men with white women.

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