All Comments on 'S is for Slippery'

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bearleebearleealmost 19 years ago
Cool

Plus I'm getting married soon :D

hongluobohongluoboalmost 19 years ago
nicely erotic

some wonderful flirtation and seduction (loved the coin bit) felt that the dressing room was a little rushed and the triple mirrors weren't given their due

some awkward wording in the 1st 2 paragraphs though the morning ritual was sweet and I was wondering (just temporarily) about bath water and the use of baby oil.

All in all though a sweetly erotic romp..... thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Didn't know water could be so hot!!

Un-freakin-believable!! Wow just doesnt' describe this. *she says as she clears the puddle that was her monitor* Great story!!

cloudycloudyalmost 19 years ago
Smokin'!

Loved this! The personal touches were perfect! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Surprise ending!!

I totally loved that, definitely could relate to the story. The surprise ending was a niiice twist!!

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