All Comments on 'Sabella & Malcolm Ch. 09'

things are mighty shifty in this town and looks like Malcolm has made another enemy.

I'm glad that Sabella and Malcolm are getting closer. They are cute. And I hope that Malcolm can protect himself from all of these enemies that he seems to continue making. I love this story. Thanks for the update.

Love the Way thing's are moving along.

Great Storyline maybe Malcolm will Finally bring the Gang Down or force them to show there Hand.

Really good story, DJ was pretty bold with dad and dad was bold right back. WOW! Totally unexpected.

I'm happy I came upon this series. Very nicely done.

I THINK SABELLA WAS SENT BACK IN TIME TO HELP MALCOM MAKE THINGS RIGHT AND HELP HIM KEEP HIS RANCH.

you have my mind imagining all types of senario's as their story unfolds, real tear jerker when malcom shared his chilahood pain with sabella, great writing!!!

It's a wonderful story and you're doing an awesome job as a storyteller keeping your audiences interest but, this cloak and dagger crap is gettihg old. Can you please get to the point sometime this century, please and thank you.

Falling in love with this couple as I read deeper. The history and small details are so on point!!!! Awesome job, chick!!!

Loving it lovely!!!!!

5*'s. Each of your chapters move very well and isn't stagnant like other stories with big chapters. You keep the supporting characters in the background without dominating and bogging down the storyline. Your quite talented with telling this story. Btw, loving Sabella, Mark, Malcolm with Regina, and Mabel. Well done!!