All Comments on 'Sable and Lilith Ch. 1'

by EternalDayDreamers

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DemonicheartDemonicheartalmost 15 years ago
!!!!!!!!!!

This story is soooooo freakin hot!!!!!!!! OMG I fantasize about that kinda shit all the time! =D

honeyblondiehoneyblondiealmost 16 years ago
Amazing!!

Love it!! Sooo HOT. Your writing is wonderful and engaging! Got me very wet!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very hot, very dangerous!

Enjoyable and hot. But please note: showing him her wears ==> her wares. ... else the cliché is mangled. Keep writing!

Leah369Leah369over 17 years ago
Please continue!

Great job ! Loved both getting both perspectives; the do-ee and the doer as it were lol GREAT! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very nice!

I loved this!

Now I just hope that there'll be a sequel to this

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