by Kapricorn71
I enjoyed this story and took the time to send detailed feedbak via email as well, but as an author I like when people also leave public comments so I decided to leave one of these as well. This was the first story that I read from you and I plan to take a look at the others as well. Thanks for sharing ;)
I thought it was well written but I do have one complaint...not long enough.
It was very nice.A friend told me about these stories since i've been curious. This was my first story and it was very good.