All Comments on 'Sacrifice 250'

by The_Technician

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fanfarefanfareover 8 years ago
Okay, T_T, you made me laugh1

This story was droll and fiendishly clever. However, the Epilogue was icing on the cake. A seriously comedic ending.

NthusiasticallyNthusiasticallyover 8 years ago
Great Call ...

on the Sexy/Techno Separation & thanks for satisfying my OCD by providing that Techno explanation.

pe1erpe1eralmost 7 years ago
The Epilogue Is Essential

Without the Epilogue my score would have been far lower, as there would have been no satisfactory conclusion. With it it is a definite 5 stars.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 6 years ago
Agreed

The epilogue was necessary, thanks for adding it. It also occurs to me that some of the sacrifices must have been pregnant, so that would have kept the command crew's numbers up, as well.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...