All Comments on 'Sacrifices'

by SouthernCrossfire

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WillDevoWillDevoover 2 years ago

The Golden Grail of Pharma Phantasy, Protagonist pleasures plenty of pill poppers' pussies. Tunaless taco tablets. Quimistry.

Fun, quick read!

servant111servant111over 2 years ago

Quite nice but needs some serious conflict...from the start to finish...it was eminently predictable. Some jealously, some small betrayals, some kind of problems that manifested over time.

Still nice story so I give it 4 stars.

WheablistWheablistover 2 years ago

Such a sweet….story

Fireguy1956Fireguy1956over 2 years ago

Good story. Not quite up to your usual standards, but entertaining none the less.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

what a hairy ordeal the protagonist went through? From lab assistant to diver. who knew...

JoshFrom53JoshFrom53over 2 years ago

Hi SC. I read it with a smile on my face. Thank you so much

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I've done regulatory affairs for bulk pharmaceuticals and medical devices. IF ONLY!!!! hehehehehe

5star story.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years ago

Great story. Well written, as always. Really enjoyed this. Such a fun premise. And it's nice to read a Happy Ever After.

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 2 years ago

In fantasyland authors should do whatever they like, but this was just silly. 2*

goodshoes2goodshoes2over 2 years ago

5 stars. Fantasy land story but funny, somewhat sexy, entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it, it made me laugh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not a romance. Not even close

tlc656tlc656over 2 years ago

I enjoy a great story despite the requisite sex. This was an immensely enjoyable story. Thank you!

olddave51olddave51over 2 years ago

I liked it!

I just wish more detail on the After affect of the marriage and the possible testing of "FellaShoEnuf!" I think Dottie could have had a little more "involvement" in loving trial with her husband. I am sure this would be a great enhancement to the series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Every one is different, every one is delicious, just as this story is! Mr. Bill

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