All Comments on 'Sad Neighbour: A Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
story ending

Love most but the last part, confused me.

sounds like Mr white knight scare off by the proposal having little Zoey? Or not willing to married to Susan?

woolmer4uwoolmer4uover 16 years ago
humanity

my compliments to you for writing such a beautiful story.I could never imagine in sex stories you will find such a classical story.the story was not focusing on sex but it was full of humanity.Let me once again congratulate you for writing such a fabulous,fantastic and mind blowing story.My best regads for you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Sexy, Romantic, Well-Written, Erotic, OMFG!

I have never liked Romance Stories, but THIS: Wow! I came on the first page & had to keep reading because the story was so well-written & the characters so realistic. Gee, I think that this is the perfect porn story! No fooling. I am no writer, but THIS was created by one! Let me tell you. Loved it. About a pint of my cum agrees from my lap, too. LOL Ooh, My goodness. Ick that needs a WashCloth. Sorry, I just noticed how gooey I am! Heh. Gr8 story. I liked how Susan described herself as 'a Bradley' after she came on his lap loudly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
...............coooooooooooool

hey seriously... when i started readin the story i was feelin like i needed to pee... stupid story is so good i still couldn't bring myself to go to pee and here i'm still wanting to compliment when i can't even contain my bladder anymore.. seriously awesome..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Really Good

I haven't read very many stories as good as this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well well well, a writer with a diseased mind !

I wonder if its posting from an asylum cell somewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

the one thing i dont get is why they were treating him like shit at the end for no reason.

i'm of the camp that there is no reason for cheating ever and those who cheat should be flayed, but nice story nonetheless

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A HAPPY SADNESS

Nothing needs said here about this terrific story.

AkilaraAkilaraover 3 years ago

Literotica is a broad field.

I like to go for a walk there.

Find many different topics, stories, and thoughts.

But every now and then, in the midst of all these things, I find a gem.

Like a diamond, it sparkles in all its beauty, cleverness and modesty.

What a wonderful story.

It's one of those rare stories that quietly whisper to me: "translate me into your mother tongue."

Then I know for sure that I read a story that touched my heart and soul.

Thank you very much and greetings from Germany.

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