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Click here"Huh! Made in Wichita, Kansas. What are the odds of that?"
Strangely I wrote chapter 4 before chapter 3, and now I'm lagging behind on part 3. My apologies. Had some recent dental work this past week so the pain pills have had me a bit loopy. I haven't been real productive the last two weeks. Luckily I have quite a few chapters of other series stockpiled to fall back on.
I swear you will get Sadie 3 by mid June. Chapter 4 a month after that seeing as it's completed already.
I just added COUGAR HOUSE 2 : JUST RELAX, and PAIGE 26 : TWINKLE TOES. Both should appear on here by Thursday.
Thanks for caring.
I am very intriged by Sadie and the other characters in this story, curious how all these characters will continue in the parts to come.
@SZensei: will you finish this story. Feels like a really long time since you promised to posted chapter 2. When do you share chapter 3?
Tnxs sofar for the first 2 parts
My Google search indicated that the HK416 was Norwegian made. If I'm in error it's due to that. I can't say I'm an expert on weapons. Anything I write I consult Google. Thanks for the tip. I guess it doesn't matter a whole lot considering I didn't delve into the guns origins. What do you suggest? Should I rephrase it or leave it as is?
At first I thought you were over-doing Sadie but she fits the story. I'm interested to see where you take it.
Minor quibble - Heckler & Koch, maker of the HK416, is a German company. Although, Norway does use them.
Keep up the good work.
Yeah my grammar kills me. I can't apologize enough. Y'know I'm a smart guy but English was never my strong point. A good Editor would be awesome if I could afford one. I can't expect one to just volunteer their services. All I can ask folks reading my stories is too enjoy the creativity over the grammar mistakes. At my age I'm sadly set in my ways. Two steps forward one step back.
I appreciate your kind words.
Thanks
Can't wait to read on. Something refreshing!! Congratulations!
Remember that plural words do not get apostrophes.
Next up is TEXAS FOLDEM. Give me a week or two. Followed by LADY PARTS, then PLUMB LOCO. The Wild West will never be the same. Did Wyndham Explorations really think she would follow orders? LOL. Of course she might learn the hard way. There again...so might they.
Now that is one very interesting story. I am really looking forward to reading more of it! Thank you!