All Comments on 'Safari Wife Ch. 03'

Sorry. The story is hard to get into with so many spelling, punctuation and grammar errors. The premise is hot and has a lot of potential.

Africa with about 75% A.I.D.s infection is a really hot place for a slut to fuck around.

per your story. But some readers get turned off by plain stupidity. This story is one of total fantasy as no person in their right mind would do and think what your story says and for that reason I really dont care for it at all. Erotica is one thing plain stupidity is another.

LOVE IT!!! Keep on adding more to this story line.

I vote you add a final chaptr 4 -- and in your spare time you write a new story. I love the way you write - can't get enough.

Very enthralling. Please continue the story Sally.

I like it . I like the african rape . I think this is hot you should write more like this

Excellent story. Looking fwd to chpt 4. The wife should continue to enjoy it and the eager husband should fulfill his wish to see his wife enjoying it.

Great story teller! Your stories are so sexy. I would like some more teasing and gangbangs in the next part. Your are the best. Hopefully the wait is not too long:)

I wonder how the boring old bags always seem to find their way into these sites. Rape? yeah right,when she orgasms three times during it?. For fuck sakes read through a few spelling errors and why bring up the bullshit about aids in what is an imaginative erotic story. Im surprised some asshole didn't whine about infidelity and how God would get her for it...

If this turns you on trapper bobbie,just bring some jungle bunnies of your own home and let them fuck the little or big woman you got,that is if you have one.Take pictures and you can jack off for months.

Keep going and keep getting fucked. Let you husband watch you getting fucked with a big black cock (I would love to see my wife do that). Be available for any and all of the men in the village and with the safari.

Great series so far. There are a few spelling and grammar errors but the story is so good it doesn't matter. I hope it goes all the way to her getting fucked (and I mean <i>getting</i> fucked) by the whole village in one giant gangbang. Maybe even selling her off to another tribe? I would so love for this to happen to my own wife. What a fantasy! Big black dick after big black dick stretching her pussy wide while fucking her deep and making her their whore. Mmmm... Great. Keep it up, please!

Please add part 4. This story is the best. I've been waiting toooooooooooooooooooooo long.

I am hoping you write more, my pussy is hot and wet after reading this. What a fantasy to be fucked over and over by those lovely big black cocks!!!

so far I have loved every bit of this story. Keep it up.

Sally

I love being restrained and taken.....but in a jungle by a tribe ..... Well I only wish it would happen exactly as you have written

Candy

This is so HOT, I can't quit reading. God what a good fucking story!! Just love your writing. Thanks.

You can carry on forever for me Sally. This is full of wild imagination and detail. I normally do not read a story if it is more than 2 pages but you could read a full book of your stuff. I am so sorry that you have stopped writing and hope it is not the few sickos that have got to you. Sally you are a brilliant writer and you put Jackie Collins in the second class category. Try something longer - maybe a novel, you could be a best selling author.

Those perverted maggots are only ones whom would read this garbage !

"1*" !

Please continue, this is the best story .gets me really excited wish I was Hank

please keep writing more.....

Love this story, great he's not cuckold but will eat their cum. I do that

I love all your stories, your imagination is fantastic.

Love the story, if it was me I would want to be sedated enough that I couldn’t move and watch as the African men come into our hut during the night and climb on her forcing their stiff cocks in her as I lay next to her and can’t stop them. I can see she tries to resist fighting back as hard as she can but the drink makes it impossible as they make her orgasm again and again. The size of their pure black cocks and stamina drive her on all night till she has no willpower left eventually giving in. She cries saying no please not again as they force her but in the end cumming harder then anyone I’ve ever seen. The men take great pleasure in looking over at me as they use her young white body to cum fill with cum. Every night it’s the same routine of giving us the potions at dinner as the male villagers watch making sure we drink it all. By the third night they are playing with her nipples as she drinks it and willingly go to the hut.

Please do not let it end, it needs more

Thank-You!!! Love this story series as much the 3rd or 4th time I've read it as I did the 1st time. What a writer, what exciting vivid mental imagery, what a wonderful straight English wife turned into to drugged horny slut story, what a genuinely transformed woman! God yes, I'd seek her out and ask her to marry me. (and we'd go back to Africa every year during her very fertile time for the current tribe chief to bed and breed her for a week, before passing her on to the rest of the men in the tribe. This would produce another strong, black, well hung son directly into her womb and guarantee the chief would father all her sons.) Eventually, the chief would take my oldest son(s) under his wing for a year - teaching my son the language, culture and ways of his true father's african tribe. Then teach my son how to make kekpo, then prep, use and seed his fertile horny white english mother at home, so she could produce more of the potent little black babies for the growth of our family - and the continuation of my son's african tribe. Maybe you could add a part 5 to this story to go along these lines??? (( Awaiting with much anticipation...)) Huggs, Wish

This is so pushing my buttons, I'm identifying as Hank.

Yes, by all means continue the story! jsmith9528@aol.com

Now story happiness, beautiful black lusting desires..I enjoy interracial mixing stories

My wife wet her panties as we read this chapter! OMG! The wife in your story got raped by four tribesmen, came of their huge black cocks numerous times, and then hubby licked their cum out of her loose pussy! This is every white couple's wet dream!

My wife said, "I wish Sally would have posted the contact information for that Safari operator. I’m ready for Africa, right now!"