All Comments on 'Safe Room Ch. 01'

Drags me right in to your world of mysteries. Another couple of pages would have been appreciated. :grin:

On a side note, it is unusual that it took 13 days from your posting of the story title 'til the first chapter showed up. Are there issues with Lit?

Thanks for the kind words.

Yes, we had a few snags, but hopefully things will be okay. I think the Lit people were busy, maybe people are submitting a lot more stories. In the 'early days' of my writings, stories would not get published for a full seven days, then it dropped to two. So let's all be patient and the stories will get there...

Just submitted Chapter 2 of the series.

I have seen that combination a number of times - makes me wonder where and when you ran into Classified - Code Word information! Only a couple of places have used that set-up and I will say no more! GREAT STORIES!

It would be a Good Thing were Lit to have a class of trusted authors whose stories bypassed moderation and were automagically published immediately. You could submit a 6-7000 word chapter everyday and we, your beloved readers, could immerse ourselves in your fantastic writing. :grin:

glad that you're back. You got another good one started!

Why am I stumbling across this piece of wonderment on a porn site? Great work. Loved it. Just wanted it to get smutty.

Noticed you posted Chapter 2 on 7/14, yet here we are on 7/17 and no Chapter 2 for us to read. Sure seems like they take forever to post your work here lately. You are one of the best mystery writers on Lit.

You might need to repost chapter 2 my friend. 5 days on from chapter 1 and no sign as of yet of chapter 2.

Excellent read, why does Literotica take soooo long to post your work? Is this a devious plan on their part to get us to read other authors work? Or are they keeping us in suspense till everyone on the board reads it first? This is a mystery only the Iron Crowbar can tackle...

No idea what the problem is. I resubmitted it.

Getting impacient and trying to blame someone for not getting my fix... :)

Enjoying your stories/chapters since perhaps three years following with great pleasure the ever crazy political & crime drama in the life story of the IC. Congrats!

But please get the submissions smooth again. Or deliver all chapters of a story together? Caaaaan't wait any longer for next chapter ... and conclusion!

Have noticed that recently your stories are getting "hung-up" in the Lit queue that stories under the "NEW" heading seem to be in batches by category.

Wonder if the "new improved" Lit is putting stories in "buckets" by category that have a certain quantity or time element for release.

Only a guess, that most of your GREAT stories are in the "Non-Erotic" group they are waiting to hit one of the "boundaries" before being released. Since not many stories are listed as "Non-Erotic" suspect your GREAT stories and others in that "bucket" are held waiting for the "time" element/limit to trip the bucket.

Hey it's "observation/deduction" stories you write thought would try a little of both as to the "WHY" it is taking so long for your GREAT stories to be posted. Or maybe it is just a "WAG" by an old man. (Wild Ass Guess)

The 'Ol Man

One Day at a Time

What is happening now is exactly the reason I don't post more than one story at a time, and wait for the first story to be published before submitting the next chapter. I've never wanted to risk Ch. 2 being published before Ch.1, etc.

And to the Ol' Man, your idea is exactly what I've been thinking... that they're now publishing by groups and waiting for a set number of non-erotic stories to be in the hopper. If my next submission is not published by Monday, I'm going to have to write a letter to them... and maybe if they are inundated with messages, they'll get my stories published in a more timely manner....

I too am hanging on - I've decided to keep breathing - by my fingernails awaiting the next chapter of you latest great story!

Dunno what's the holdup with Literotica, Maybe they're on holidays!

At least I have time to reread the chapter over a time or 2 while I wait. Still have not guessed the bag guy yet in all of your stories. Been close a few times. Keep up the great writing!!

This is getting to be a real pain. I fully understand waiting for publication of a chapter before submitting the next one but us loyal followers are turning blue waiting with bated breath for the next installment. Is it not now at least a week since you submitted the next part??

Should be published tomorrow...

They publish the cuck crap rapidly. But this one is taking way too long. Seems they are all into the mobile platform rather stories. When they dump a big load of stories I tend to not be able to keep up. So I do not finish stories which takes away from authors.

I love ur stories!

They may might be censoring you because your stories are comments on today's real political world OR Beekeeper and this plot line tripped the NSA's computer as revealing a dark, black secret!

Honestly believe you should move to a blog and we all loyal fans will follow you there. It will also bring visibility big time

What ever changes Lit is making seem to be screwing things up more than normal. Not sure if they have two different ways to submit of if they just can not deal with doing the changes and keeping up with stories submitted. Either way it is getting bad enough that I do a lot of my reading over at Wattpad.

Well you're getting far more commrnts which should be good, unfortunately most concern your publishing issues.

Another great start, love the way you weave the threads and make it so interesting. So looks like we have Oldeeds rearing it's head again and who is Beekeeper; have we come across him / her before? Anything to do with Honeybee?

Oh boi!!!!!!!! this is get very interesting. Thanks for sharing.