by andtheend
Cute story, but the stock market crash and the resulting economic difficulties that precipitated the Great Depression did not happen until late October 1929--ten months after the St. Valentine's Day Massacre.
In fact, the economy had been very robust until the Fall. Nice yarn; can't let a little timeline problem get in the way of a good story!
I liked the details, right down to the Amos and Andy radio show and everything being swell. I think you captured the moment well.
I felt as though I was there 80 years ago. I loved the dialogue. It was interesting learning about the real story of what happened back then. I always figured it was just criminals. I never figured there was someone real, someone innocent, and someone in love.
Thanks for this story.
What a fantastic twist on an old story You brought that time back to life for us.
Hey why couldn't have happened that way. It's a love story and it's valentine day related.Well done straight forward dialogue.I felt like I was there. that really was a tragedy.
Thank you for the entertainment, I really enjoyed the twist at the end, too.
felt as if i was living in those times.. Very touching story.. Made me sad.. But very nice.. Thank you..