All Comments on 'Sal & The Kid'

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So wait a minute, is he saying that a couple of his friends raped Lil? (Ecstasy)

What would be fair about that, Sal?

Excellent

Really well done.

5 stars

Great story!

5

Damm thats was a tale, and quite an original one at that. A truer friendship like bonds of a family member that Sal and the Kid shares. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I appreciate the story, but how does the "Loving Wives." category fit in.

Excellent story, loved it! Going Nuclear to BTB's are my favorite and this one was short, to the point and awesome. Thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Loved it.

Your mechanism of focusing on the best friend took a standard "cheat and burn" to another level.

Well done.

Everyone should have a Sal in their life. That friend who would go the extra mile to have your back.

Love the story gave it a five.As Dion Warwick sang that's what friends are for.

Great story. Please continue writing

If we only all had friends that loyal.

Great story line, intro was on point and the ending was realistic. Well done.

Excellent realistic story

Yay - finally not a cuck story!!! Loved it.

sad but again told so well by you. GREAT thanks again

Loyalty to the very end. OOORAHH!

Good read.

Well told.

Thanks for sharing.

I would have sent my buddy the pictures from the parking lot and called him. Then handed the phone to her in the parking lot and say "Hi Lil, its your husband".

Nicely done

I like this a lot. Thanks

She turned from a cold bitch to contrite so fast, I got whiplash!

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"if her husband divorces her and your wife divorces you, you still don't ever go within a mile of her." - Why not? A couple of cheaters deserve each other. One or the other, or both, would be cheating within a year.

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Why would he get custody? Sal didn't tell he to give Tim custody.

Not a terrible story, and definitely interesting to read from a POV that isn't the cheating slut or the betrayed husband

just a good story with a realistic ending

A good friend!

Very good. Nothing over the top, just a slice of life that has happened to thousands. 5 stars.

Difficult to come up with something new in LW, but ttt accomplished that with this concise and interesting story.

That is a good friend to the end. We should all have such a friend since so many times they try not to “take sides”. Well written

“I just can't find a way to say no to him.” Yeah, right 😎

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Just a fantastic job of telling a common trope here from a different angle. I would give anything for a friend like Sal. Lil’s reaction to Sal pretty much demonstrated her rotten character — combative, no remorse, arrogance. She got what she deserved…maybe even more, but the “The Kid” had to protect his kids’ relationship with their mother.

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If there was anything missing, it was not knowing if Lil brought that arrogant attitude to The Kid when she confessed, or did she — however belatedly or coerced — felt any remorse for her actions? Probably doesn’t matter….on the assumption Sal eventually told The Kid about his conversation with the Slut, it probably wouldn’t have mattered much.

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5 *****

man, every good guy could use a Sal in his life.

every doormat, pussy-whipped beta male must have one.

very good read mr.ttt59.

thank you.

You have a winner here. Great job. Wish though I could have heard Her story of why with more detail. And that she was at least sorry. Thanks SK742 *****

Far-fetched but well-written and entertaining. Five stars

Original -- I like original; 5*

Some friend this arsewipe turned out to be. HE should have told his BFF "The Kid" about seeing his wife etc and showing the photos/videos. Making himself the bully-boy and dictating terms for a divorce if it takes place is just ridiculous. Same thing for the Dr's wife and attempting to control/dictate things there.

Arsewipe is in no position to do anything. Just ridiculous.

We’ll told and unique story. We’ll done!

Thank you for sharing it.

Nice!

Everybody needs a friend like Sal.

God…we ALL need a friend like Sal. Divorce was the best for Tim and his kids. She was…and will always be a shank of a woman. Thanks for this

Good story and somewhat novel which is best compliment in LW.

Beautiful story

Interesting angle. Always love seeing a friend be a stand up guy no matter how difficult the circumstances.

First r me the story went a bit off the rails during the confrontation between Sal & Lil. Her explanation of getting swept of her feet by the rich, handsome doctor and the affair allowing her to put her persona of wife and mother aside so she can just feel like a woman makes sense. It's a slimy thing to do. Very selfish and short sighted. But, it makes sense and fits within the limited character development we've been given for Lil.

Having her go full psycho bitch, threatening to destroy her husband of Sal doesn't play by her rules. Then having her turn on a dime and try to seduce Sal into staying quiet.

Neither of those actions fit within the brief character info we've been given.

The justification for Sal's actions and behavior had already been well established and supported. Turning Lil into a caricature of a psycho, slut wife was over the top and frankly felt like lazy writing in an attempt to support an ending that already stood on it's own merits.

Very nice and heartwarming with a dash of darkness.

Very nice and heartwarming with a dash of darkness.

I liked it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Well done. Nice to read a well writen store that does not involve Super Spys, 3 letter goverment agencies, Special Forces, etc.

Just a friend standing up for a friend.

5*

True friends are indeed a treasure. While I doubt the evil-doers in this would have done everything our hero requested, it’s nice to think it could have unfolded just as he planned.

Well written, thanks for sharing.

Good to have friends with the right skillset.

Really good story, I only wish it were longer.

Nice twist … and I’d like to see Sal show up again. Maybe Tim can help repay the favor. 5/5

Great story would you be my friend

The POV made this interesting. I liked the ending where The Kid doesn’t fall in love with the first available women he sees as happens to so many betrayed husbands in these stories. 5 Stars.

4 stars. Would be 5 if you allowed Kid a good woman to replace the skank. The kids need a real mother.

4 stars. Would be 5 if you allowed Kid a good woman to replace the skank. The kids need a real mother.

I like the set up in both cases to let the kid fight a fair fight. When they were kids he just evened things out so the kid could fight a fair battle.

As adults the kid didn't know he was fighting for his marriage , so Sal simply evened things out and let the kid fight a fair fight.

I think I would beat that doctor weekly for a year or 15

OUTSTANDING!!! We need a lot more Sal's in LW.

LeonardSpencer is a dumb motherfucker

Thanks, enjoyed the realism.

Excellent story. Too bad the Doctor didn't contact her later so Sal could have kept his promise to the Doctor.

The Neanderthal

what an absolutely riveting story that was it kept me going right to the end. the ending was good also could have gone many ways. thanks for a great yarn mate

Both Lil and the good doctor were smug, self servicing, entitled brats. Neither had an ounce of remorse. BEFORE Sal. Then the playing fields were brought on par. Solid work Sal!!

Five stars. A excellent story. Original (from my perspective) and well written.

I'd have preferred a Dr Porter rumor, two guys and baseball bat over a Lil rumor.

Nicely done. I liked the idea of not fighting his battles for him, but ensuring that the battles he has to fight are fair ones. I wish I’d had someone like that in my life more often.

Damn fine story.

Might be a great series. “Better Call Sal” has a familiar ring to it.

Sal your the man

Mild Burn? No, it was skillful! 5/5!

Luved your perspective on this story. Your story deserves more than the 5 star rating. Well done

Simple, but nicely done...

Yup, better call Sal. A good friend indeed. Thanks that was fun

Great story. Everyone needs a friend like Sal. Suggestion: Write another story where Sal and Tim find a pair of twins and have a double wedding. Add it to the Romance section. Just a thought.

Sal is a true friend, someone you can count on to have your back despite the consequences

I thought this was a great story of friendship and personal loyalty, very well-told.

Many years ago, while flying home from a business trip, I ran into my neighbor from the home across the street from mine, arm-in-arm with a woman other than his wife.

He and his wife were both friends of ours, and when he saw me, he let go of the woman's hand, excused himself, and walked across the concourse to me. He started to say something we both knew was bullshit, when he looked in my eyes, stopped what he was saying, and asked me how much time I would give him to come clean to Debbie, his wife.

This was late Friday afternoon, and I said if Debbie didn't know by Monday from him, she would know on Tuesday from me.

He thanked me, apologized for putting me in that position, and walked back across the concourse to where the woman was waiting.

The subject of the conversation was very evident, and after about 5 minutes, he patted her hand, picked up his carry-on bag, and walked away from her, headed for the exit of the airport.

Monday evening he met me when I pulled up to my house from work, apologized to me again, and said Debbie was not going to divorce him, but he was going to keep himself on a short leash, and hoped that someday he would have be able to regain some trust by his wife again. A big reason for her decision was their three kids...

...I'm happy to say their marriage survived and after 2 1/2 years, they were totally past the incident... shexwas a VERY classy lady, and she made sure he became the person he had been.

I guess this 5 stars because it rang such a familiar chime to me... and I did think it was well-written !

Enjoyed the new twist as no one has ever tried that spin here. What I didn't enjoy was the rushed finish. 4* overall.

Nothing like friends to have your back

Lifelong friendships are a thing to be treasured.

Did Lil still love Tim, aka. the Kid, and was it like she said, and she just didn't know how to say no to the Doc. It's hard to say. In the coffee shop she tried to bluff but she had no hand to play so she had to fold. The Doc, well he was just a punk, and he folded so fast you had to look fast; it was comical. No one really knows what is in the mind of another person, so we try to attribute our thoughts to the other person. More times than not we are wrong.

Really a good story. 5-stars. Thanks

The standard bad writing job for LW

Gets you an average score

Loved it

Great story, and a great friend in Sal. Cheating assholes cave quickly in front of a strong man with evidence and implacable rage.

Good story. Wish I had a Sal in my life. Yes, divorcing the unremorseful skank was the only play. Both shitheads knew not to fuck with Sal, Lenard.

Nice, original story.

Ed

Very original angle on this. Well dine!

I think one important difference that this story had that most of the others do not is it didn’t end happy. It ended right, but there were no unicorns and roses, there was simply the reality dealing with infidelity. I enjoyed the story, but I also enjoyed the way you decided to end it.

I really enjoyed this one.

Since there are only a limited number of plausible plot-lines that can be used, Loving Wives authors are severely challenged and are limited to adding variety to the details. I know writers often avoid the genre because there are only so many ways to re-tell the same story.

I love seeing a common story theme from a new perspective.

Good story. It touched base with me.

I've had a friend since before kindergarten and there's almost nothing I wouldn't do for him.

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She turned from a cold bitch to contrite so fast, I got whiplash! - wasn't enough to stop nitpicking!

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"if her husband divorces her and your wife divorces you, you still don't ever go within a mile of her." - Why not? A couple of cheaters deserve each other. One or the other, or both, would be cheating within a year.- not your story, so it was written how ttt59 wanted to write it!

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Why would he get custody? Sal didn't tell he to give Tim custody.- she thought it was a good idea, not your story!

Very good... In life a man can count on one hand his true friends, with luck he will live near them to enjoy life together. Sal is one of an uncommonly rare 'good' friend.

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Sal did it right leaving the final decision to the betrayed spouse, then support the aggrieved spouse/kids. Sal was a man of honor, principle, with morals - a rare man we all want to be.

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6******, Hooyah, many Salutes...

From the other side of the tracks.

Doctor Bitch Slapped.

Refreshing story - kind of sounds like Chicago

No story complaints from me.

RCD

Interesting take on catching a cheating wife from an unusual perspective. A truly good friend, hard to find, and priceless in real life. The disconcerting issue in the story was how hard and unrelenting Lil was. Unexpected and really aggravating! I guess eight months of a steady diet of cheating can initiate a sense of entitlement, but the crass disregard had to be more deeply rooted. Good story, might have been better without the treats of physical violence. There are better ways to solve problems, be innovative.

Good change of pace writing from another viewpoint. Keep writing.

Another cheating wife story. She would have gotten the kids by any judge. Alimony 50% of assest. Child support till the kids are 18. The system is not fare.

A breath of fresh (almost unique) air. Sweetie could go from wolverine to woolly lamb and back again in milliseconds. Scary… and a guarantee Sal would put his big thumb on any scales if he thought Hubby was considering RAAC.

5*

I really liked the “interested party” perspective. IMO it worked extremely well. Really good job — a cheating wife story, without BTB, without reconciliation, the wronged parties came out functional with minimal damage. Karma with help from Sal the 5th wheel.

Just to have one friend like Sal.................5 stars

Could have been a bit longer with some more interesting "game playing" between the Doctor, Lil, and Sal. Maybe a bit more mind fucking involved. But overall, it was good and I can see where your stories are getting better.

Nice.

Good ideas.

But a little limited as a story.

4 out of 5 from me.

a friend like Sal is worth his weight in gold

We need a series on Sal like friends. Great story. I enjoyed it.

Man I coulda used a friend like that a time or two . And I woulda reciprocated a time or ten ! Great story a 5 from me with a standing ovation !

If only, if only.