All Comments on 'Sally-Ann’s Rain Man'

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JonATaylorJonATaylorover 11 years ago
Entertaining Banter Between Lovers

Light and easy read. Very enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Just loved it

Great story, nice plot, thank you ;-)

SirBigfootSirBigfootover 8 years ago
another great one

but again one that needs follow up chapters.

pc10pc10over 8 years ago
Another nice one

Like it.But needs another chapter.Would love to read other part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
worst

This story is poorly written and very hard to follow.

ThelvynerThelvynerabout 7 years ago
Author has a reoccurring problem

You really really need something to distinguish the constant switches between their pov. It was immensely frustrating trying to constantly figure out who was talking or thinking rsolely through context through the whole story. This is a problem in more than just this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I liked this story. It had a little bit of just about everything. Ominous, silly, funny, playful, romance and sex. What’s not to like? As far as POV changes, I had that pretty much figured out by the end of the first page, so no worries mate. I believe this one is certainly a Five Star effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I loved the story. Thanks, Andy SAG

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