All Comments on 'Sally Makes my Day'

by darwinmulay

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JoeehartleyJoeehartleyabout 3 years ago

Thanks for the read.

bottovarnisbottovarnisalmost 3 years ago

Pretty good. I enjoyed the fact that it wasn't overly sexually dramatic so it had a real feel to it, not a fantasy. It was also good that the male wasn't a classic "horn dog", just an average looking and behaving guy. Nice start, keep going and thank you.

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