All Comments on 'Sally, Summer of Sex Ch. 10'

The early part of the story prior to meeting kyle and family didn't turn me on then things started to turn around and it was the end. I can only assume more to come other wise guess I wasted my time.

Normally I don't respond publicly to comments on my stories and not at all to anonymous submissions. But you make a valid point for yourself and others. My style tends to focus on the characters more than the sex and that's one reason I tend to write longer series -- to focus on the characters. Private e-mail communications tell me there are many readers who like that form but I understand not all do.

From your comment its possible that you like such stories but didn't like the Sarah/Sally interaction at the beginning of this story. In which case more specifics about why you disliked it would be useful.

I much prefer non-anonymous comments so I can engage in a dialog with commentators. Even better, private e-mail comments are appropriate when you have a message intended for the author. After all your true identity is already hidden behind the Literotica login name.