All Comments on 'Sally's Portal Ch. 04'

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ModsognirModsognirover 3 years ago

Ooooh, this is great. I hope you can continue this story :)

Thank you very much for writing it.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 3 years ago
This is a really interesting story.

It is hard to follow with the delay between chapters, but I am enjoying it and look forward to the next one. Thanks

MKotyk24MKotyk24over 3 years ago
Building tension

You keep the reader intrigued. Well done with the story . It was original and fresh.

KirkandSweeneyKirkandSweeneyabout 2 years ago

So… don’t mean to rush you or anything, but how is that next chapter coming along?

xtorchxtorchabout 2 years agoAuthor

Heheh. Yeah, I went and wrote the sequel to Two Hundred Dollars.

Maybe I should get back to this one.

I kinda felt like a woman who could summon demons by masturbating *should* have been a good premise for a story.

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The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...

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