All Comments on 'Salt and Pepper'

by kerrymcboyd

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story

I'd love to read part 2.

yowseryowserover 6 years ago
Splendid

Lovely tale, elegantly written.

WickedlittlemeWickedlittlemeover 6 years ago
I liked it.....

I wasn't sure I would but I really did. I just got through with your other postings and liked those as well. Hopefully, you'll post another chapter to this but it works as a stand alone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Extremely well written

Most enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Good story. Had a similar encounter in real life.

63lsmith63lsmithover 6 years ago
VERY NICE

Well done, hope you have another chapter coming soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hmm...

Although I'm still waiting in anticipation for another chapter of your other series, I still enjoyed this one. I wouldn't mind at all if you have this one another chapter. Your writing makes your stories very enjoyable, so keep on! :)

Spadger2Spadger2over 6 years ago
Gay but Shy!

Now, we are all waiting to see what was going to happen next. The whole incident seemed very opportune for both Gabe and his come-by-chance lover.

Having lived a monogamous, heterosexual relationship whilst my wife was alive, I am still trying to come to terms with my own innate feelings of gayness, although I am still a virgin in that regard.

unknownmuseunknownmuseover 4 years ago
Truth

I absolutely could see me as his toy for the night.

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