All Comments on 'Salvage Ch. 01'

Just checking…umm…where are you hiding the non consensual stuff? Usually by now, in this category - NON CON, the author has brought that flavor out for the readers. But so far everything has an extremely consensual feel. YEAH YEAH YEAH KIDNAPPING ASIDE, I GET IT. But honestly the story so far is filled with far more light BDSM and heavy romantic overtones, than anything NON CON related. I mean we have two broken and twisted star crossed lovers finding each other just in time to save themselves from a meaningless lonely existence. Or as suicide usually causes, a meaningless death…but I digress and defer to allow you to add your own romantic words here instead on me rambling on…mostly because it’s your story.

Anyways, it was a good read and I appreciated it. Thank you for sharing. And while I feel the romantic HEA ending is already writing itself I will still be back to check out chapter two and see where you continue to take this story and your characters - no matter what category it may fall into.

Holy shit I don’t normally comment but damn this is like everything I’ve wanted in a story. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

What is the reference of Miranda and flower beds mean? That he’s done this before? Can some explain?

Same inquiry as abrunettevixen. It feels like that's a reference we're supposed to know, but I don't know what it is.

Would love a sequel.