All Comments on 'Salvation Ch. 01'

Hey there like your story . Kept me right there wanting more. And truly enjoyed reading it. Also erotic thanks John

from an oh, so talented and sexy writer!

Absolutely in love with your writing style. You know how to keep the reader hooked and begging for more. Each of your characters has unique persona's that are easy to understand and I know that I positively adore each one. Keep up the good work!

I read Persuasion in one go so I could read this. I really love your writing, but I feel bad for Nate. Yes, he was a player, but I don't think he deserves what Vince has done to him. And his bi-sexuality definitely still feels forced to me. Pax seems like a great guy, but Nate is clearly in love with Ash and struggling without her. And to disagree with her, he isn't nicer or better as he is now. His life has gone to hell. IMHO.

~K.

This is not going to be an easy journey for Nate. But I think he'll find his way through eventually. :-)

Hey Jase! What happened to Persuasion? I wanted to read it again while awaiting the continuation of Salvation but it was removed?!? Please say you plan to post it here...

Hopefully this time without spelling mistakes and with all its italics restored. :-)

Jase.

Love the writing style and the story thread...I could think of a few ways to get Nate’s pics back and shame those who are blackmailing him .... lets see the continuation soon ....excellent

There's no continuation. Why did I start this?