All Comments on 'Salvation Pt. 01'

KEEPING WRITING. AWAITING ON GOING CHAPTER(S).

Great plot development. More please!

I have enjoyed what you have done with this story so far and wait for more. This world you have created and it's characters need to grow and change and I hope that is what you have planned.

hope to see more soon

Please write more Please!

I rarely comment but that brilliant. More please

Starting out real good. Can't wait to read more.

Good story so far. I hope you keep going.

Excellent the way you built around the settlement of an old Wal-Mart. Great character building as well. Please keep the story going.

Please write more soon! I love this plot.

That was one of the best stories i've ever read, keep upthe great work!

The first chapter of the story Salvation is exciting and gripping sci-fi story telling. An intricate mix of science fiction, romance, and drama offer the reader a superior and moving reading experience, well-written, and carefully paced, with believable and compelling characters, and a plot that never slackens for a moment. Five stars.