All Comments on 'Sam and Linda, Marco and Eva'

We have cruised many times and would love to meet a couple on the ship that we could end up with like in this story. Well written and very hot story. Would love to see more stories around both couples in the future.

It was brilliant i

I just hope my wife comes upstairs soon, I'm going to fuck her all night

WOW what a great story,as are all the stories you have written so far,Would love to experience any of these times.KEEP it coming

I honestly think that this is the BEST story I have ever read on Literotica (and I've been coming here for five years). Wow, wow, wow!

Nice lead in but a very strange ending, that leaves one up in the air. Sex descriptions are good as always. I probably will skip any more 'Loving Wives' tales you may write

I don't believe I've heard "chow down" in decades.

Sub humans in paradise.

I wanted to kike this story but it has severe issues. The start was good but the lead in to the husband and wife cheating was way too short unless they were swingers already. The brother and sister having sex together in this situation was weird and the ending was not satisfying at all. The author writes well but falls short telling the story like so many writers. A good story teller is worth 100 writers. Look at Hollywood and the colossal movie failures because they told a bad story the audience hated. I am sure the writers wrote the script well but they didn't tell a good story. This story has very good potential but needs a rewrite with elements that make it believable and a better ending even if there will be a second part.