by TheNightBandit
though the transition from "prude" to "exhibitionist" can be slower and more gradual. Otherwise great job.
Very well done! Writing was stellar, (except for that repeated spelling error), the plot was outstanding. Enjoyed the hell out of it. Hope this is one of many to come.
I know this was already brought up but cloths? Really. Also,a "C" cup is not very big,especially on a fit woman. Bra sizes go from A-K so C is pretty modest in size. I also have a pet peeve-never mention the word sag or sagging when referring to women's breasts,even if you are saying they don't sag.
I liked your story and as far as spelling who cares . it was a good story and I hope you have a 2nd chapter.
Really great story. It had me hard all the way through. Love the lingerie bits and whilst I prefer panties/knickers to thongs the flashing scenes were a big turn on.
This was a great story. I really lover the transformation from shy girl to tease. The flashing on the train is great. I look forward to more!
Whatever I say, it won't be enough. Fantastic descriptions of how she looked and felt as she acquired a greater awareness of her physical and mental being. Samantha is one sexy woman. You make it sound as if it would be an incredible turn on to just be around her!
Loving this story, especially that it features a tall woman with believably sized boobs. (I can't understand why anyone likes child-women with overcompensating water melon boobs).
5*.
Lots of directions you can go with this. Would like to see more.
I know cloths call is using the wrong word, like cloths instead of clothes. The story is so well written otherwise, but it's frequent misuse kept pulling me out of the moment. It got hotter when that word stopped appearing so much.