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All Comments on 'Samantha's Visit'

by Lemontwist

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
In English Would Be Good

Such appalling writing! Maybe have one of Lit's volunteer editors have a play with it, then resubmit it. One star now, potentially three if fixed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Pussie?

This is in bad need of editing.

Awful, unbelievable dialogue and very poor English,

It's 'pussy' FFS.

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