by magmaman
I thought it was great. Happened to me once (double booked room) but I didn't get as lucky as Jerry...only a free room. Keep up the great writing!
As always! You know this guy did not get too badly damaged in exchange for
a valuable lesson! Still what does he know about Jerri?
It's good to have a story with a bit of humour in it. Do more please.
Too short a story for one that was so entertaining and enjoyable to read. Was getting that good feeling smirk on my face from reading a great story and the damn thing ended. GGGrrrr. Top marks.
He knows enough. He hasn't asked her to marry him - just made a date to explore further. Now we can hope Triple M writes a second story about wading through a long range relationship that turns into a close range permanent relationship.
this was a nice little stiry i enjoyed it very much, I rather hope there is more coming .
Sorry again for the typos, I ran back through this three times and still missed some.
Probably because I will be 70 soon and my 2.5 power glasses need to be stronger.
For those of you who wish some sort of ending? This story was about a beginning, who knows where it could end? In my mind, the part that leaves a smile on my own face is the "Perhaps?"
Stories of moments in life all end the same, one day with memories and then the final transition. I could write that, it would be easy.
"They lived happily ever after."
LoL
No sequel, none needed here, I am off to another idea.
Thanks,
MGM
I disagree with some of the others. While a sequel could work, leaving it as is allows the imagination to take it to what ever destination one wishes.
I always look forward to your stories and click on them even if the title doesn't catch my eye. All I need to see is your name as author. Thanks for the enjoyment.
well tempoed story. No sequel is necessary, indeed I think it would spoil things.
Leave it alone - it is great as it is -
Turns out to be good for both of them.....funny and very enjoyable....
I felt they got over their anger at one another a little quickly but it didn't ruin anything. They were nice together. Hopefully they'll be able to find a way to get together more permanently. Good work.
A fun story that did what it was supposed to do, entertain. I guess the ending was as good as could be expected but it would have been nice to see it taken further.