All Comments on 'SaM's Place Ch. 02 of 15'

And I look forward to how it unfolds. I enjoy the way you build the story.

Is this going to be another bdsm story in the wrong category?I like it rough but hate brain washing and mathematics(one thank you sir ..two thank you sir...).

Is this the kind of story that starts with ''please I beg you NO'' but ends with ''I beg you, more please''and some loving? you have seriously got to make the chapters longer. I like to know what I'm voting for. But I'm loving the details. Can't wait to find out where this is going so keep writing.

OK, you have hooked me! I wish to take this tale/t

our of Discovery and intrigue!

5*

The scene with the doorbell girls reminded me a bit of H. Dean's work. Definitely gave me a couple ideas. The track concept is particularly interesting, and very creative.

I writing this early in the read to let you know I am hooked. Which i assume is your intent. I love reading this kind of story by a skillful story teller like yourself. So glad I stumbled onto it.