All Comments on 'San Francisco Pt. 02'

Fantastic sexy tale. Loving this immensely and eager to read more please.

Thanks @Frankie1952. Feedbacks like these is giving me the confidence to write more.

Not a big fan of the dialogue. By your own admission, you're trying to make this a romance, and it does get a bit cheesy. Having said that, your situations, your writing, the story flow, they're all great. I'd rate it a four objectively, but ratings inflation being what it is, and so many far worse stories getting four or even five stars, there is no way I could only rate it a four. So 5/5 stars it is.

Dewey Cheatham

Oh, FYI, you mention Darth Aussie as a mate, so I don't know if you're Aussie, Kiwi, or somewhere else in that region, and certainly don't know those laws. But in the states, contrary to opinion, in the majority of states, marrying a cousin is legal. I know there's a stigma attached, but legally in most states, and actually genetically, there is no reason someone can't do so.

Really enjoyed reading both parts your story looking forward to the next one . Thanks for writing it.