All Comments on 'Sandalwood Pt. 01'

by FlynnTalwar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Cannot wait for part two

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good start, plenty of storyline to play with for next episodes. Are we in Canada or the US? (I am in neither).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A very nice, albeit short, start. I do hope you produce the next part(s?) soon.

FlynnTalwarFlynnTalwarover 2 years agoAuthor

Lol, thanks, that means a lot. It's my first post so I didn't know how long a page on Literotica would be, vs. a typed page in Word. Part 2 will be a bit longer, coming up in about a week.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Looked good, not a giant fan of Maya "almost" cheating with Cole, if she does what makes her better than Janice? If she doesn't want to be married to her monk husband she should divorce him. If she hooks up with Cole it begs the question how many other men she has hooked up with since her husband went to find himself in Nepal. I am interested to see where this goes.

Richie4110Richie4110over 2 years ago

This story has legs and I’m looking forward to the rest of it.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If people think this is cheating, it's not. He's divorced and she's been separated for 3 years from a man who was clearly never interested in her as a woman, let alone a partner. People also have to consider there may be cultural reasons why Maya never sought an official divorce.

LM20ZNLM20ZNabout 2 years ago

It's called a "thali" and not a "necklace" or whatever other word you used

FlynnTalwarFlynnTalwarabout 2 years agoAuthor

LM20ZN Yes, it is called a thaali in certain languages, as well as a mangalasutram in north India and a thirumangalyam down south.

Which is why, since this story is set in Canada (and this story is written in English) I decided it would be most easily understood by an international readership to call it a marriage necklace. It is, after all, the literal English translation of the word thaali.

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Thanks for dropping by. I'm a long-time writer but only recently joined Literotica when I was able to get back into my craft for love and no longer for money. My stories will almost always feature interracial couples, although that's not by far the main theme of any of them....

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