All Comments on 'Sandi's Fantasy'

by WSchnotz

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved it!

Loved your story! Well written, hot, and characters that were actual characters, not just fuck puppets! Sandi reminded me so much of an old girlfriend I had back in college, she was a fantastic, sexy, complex woman to read about! Well done.

WSchnotzWSchnotzover 12 years agoAuthor
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Thank's for the response. After 10,000 views, excluding the star feedback, I was curious what anyone had to say.

I'm glad that I was able to strike a chord. The character Sandi is a conglomerate of an ex of mine, a current coworker, and an animated character(I take my inspiration where I can get it).

I have a couple of other things in the works. Life has gotten in the way a bit, but hopefully I will finish those up and get them posted soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wicked

I want to play too!

Loved the line - "Ninth Circle of Dante's Hell becomes an Inferno" - one of the few places down there that a snowball would have a chance ;p

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great First

You mentioned your vague characters in your disclaimer. I actually liked that you didn't go into minute descriptions. You gave just enough for the reader to complete the image and focused more on the personalities. Overall the characters were great.

This was a fun story. I loved the dry humor and the touch of the mundane that made these characters and situations very real. I laughed at Sandi not including Craig in the switching of places.

Do they still make that soccer all ice cream? That's a blast from the past!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Dude!

Write another man! This rocked!

Was this based on something that really happened?

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