All Comments on 'S&M Lesbian Strip Poker'

Nice job, especially the ending. There's a bit too much 'whooping it up' going on, though. Also, personally I prefer stories with women who's bodies have some flaws instead of everybody being 'perfect'.

Hope that's only the first chapter?

Breezey, fun, well written and easy reading. It turned me on. Thanks for the jerk off material.

loved it but i want to get sequal.

That was so hot...would love to see a coed night where some young frat boy gets collared!!

Whatever you say, dear, whatever you say.

A lovely and well-written story, one I have only just come upon, and I found it delightful.

5 *s and many thanks. I shall have to check your profile for more.

I am not a lesbian either. I am not even a woman!

But I loved the story. It did turn me on.

I agree with sexxynick, a young frat boy getting collared by a bunch of horny girls would even be better.

Great story, though. Thank you

...Rule No. 1: if you do not know, who is the targeted pigeon to be fleeced by the other players, the pigeon is you!

I really enjoy bdsm scenes where what is to ahhpen gtts handed over to a 'system', be it truth or dare, a spin-dial on a board, drawing lots, or strip poker. This was great, even if the slave enjoyed it...

If I have to read "whooping it up" one more time I may hang myself. It was a lovely story concept but it reads as if it were written by a teenage girl.

Quite a fun little story. The strap on sex part suffered a bit with the descriptive writing, but the rest was pretty good. All the girls are dreadful poker players though. And if anyone folds or considers folding a set of queens when it's the second nuts should stop playing poker - certainly based on pre-flop betting.

You caught me by surprise with that ending. I expected the usual just like most writers. Thanks for throwing a surprise in there, great story.

I have never wanted to be someone as much as I do now want to be and long to take Heather's place! Damn!!!!

An absolute all time classic. Please write more !!!