by hardwillingone
Apart from the bad word-choice of your detractors, it is a good tale, well-presented, no 'stumble-over' typos and highly readable.
Cheers,
Kilroy
...every basic tenant of writing. Apparently, a lack of education is okay with some people.
Did the wife have to so cruel? and why not really spice things up let the scotts wife catch them and she ends up with nothing just a beast that can't be quenched!
She is a used slut. Turning away a man who loves her, for sex with a man married to another. And to get more sex from him she will have to ask his wife. She is a pathetic adulterer with no morals, not ethics, no character, and now no real life. It is really very sad to see a woman finally get into the gutter to find she can now never get out.
Have a taste now needs his manhood.
Ask the wife to move in and serve them both
What a juvenile, stupid, piece of crap story. No emotional center. She’s physically small 21 year old and beats up men all the time? She fucks this married guy all over his house and yard? No repercussions for Scott? No repercussions for her? She blythely breaks up with her boyfriend for a big cock? This “story” has less plot than a 10 minute porn clip.