All Comments on 'Sandra's Passions...Ch. 6'

It's been some time since your last posting and it's only by chance that I revisited your site and I'm soooo glad that I did, because not only did I find a chapter 6 for this series but also another brand new story !!! Thanks.

hard to believe someone would write six chapters on this crap you must be a big time loser.

For five chapters the guy telling the story is named Frank and his wife is Sandra. Now in the last chapter he's identified as Bill. Who the fuck is Bill and whats with this Dave character. Where did he come from. Jeeze I hate it when authors can't keep their plot and characters straight. The last chapter is a total throw away having nothing to do with the preceding five chapters. It was bad enough the starring couple got divorced and then back together, sort of, with hardly more than two sentences explaining anything. I don't give two hoots about the theme being objectionable to some people. I kind of liked it, but the story overall is a prime example of very poor workmanship. Just a little preplanning and outline to keep it straight would have made a world of difference. As it was, nothing but a stroke story and atrociously constructed. Don't come back until you learn how to put a story together. I'm not registered on Literotica so no email automatically but will not criticize anonymously. So here is my email: johngalt2300@yahoo.com

no true man would let his wife fuck another man.