All Comments on 'Santa, Baby'

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rayironyrayironyover 3 years ago
Giggle worthy!

The season seems a bit less onerous now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Merry Christmas

Wow that was a lot of fun. So little to do with Christmas yet completely captured what I felt it should be about.

PoisonPen33PoisonPen33over 3 years ago
Karma's a bitch...

...and like Santa, she delivers on Christmas!

Trixie was the PERFECT representation of one of Santa's elves! Thinking Glenlivet was third-rate alcohol made me laugh out loud.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The opening scene with Judge Santa was one of the funniest things I've ever read. A great story the whole way through. ☆☆☆☆☆

tangledweedtangledweedover 3 years ago

Insanely hot and yet sweet at the same time. Liam and Sandy were adorable and I liked this elf a lot more than the one Will Ferrell portrayed (disclaimer: couldn't stomach the movie Elf, but would be happy to watch these characters in a movie).

The pace of the climatic scene was absolutely perfect; not too fast or too slow. Kudos on killing it on the humor and sexy fronts, while still keeping it sweet and sensitive. I should be used to it by now, but I still get surprised by how good the writing can get on Literotica, whether we have to pay for it or not.

nestorb30nestorb30over 3 years ago

So needs a follow up!

mfan2112mfan2112over 3 years ago

The mix of humor and sex was wonderful. Great story. 5 stars! And Omerlon cleaning toilets, the only thing better than an airport would have been the bus station.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent

Very clever, and just enough amusing fantasy.

Sexykat62Sexykat62over 3 years ago
Merry Christmas 🎁

Let the Christmas season begin 🎉 Loved it 👏

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Really great Christmas tale. Should become a classic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Best Ever

Davester37Davester37over 3 years ago
What a wonderful story!

I just loved it. Merry Christmas!

As always, thank you for writing it, and thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

i always wanted to be an elf ! yummy

Booboobear84Booboobear84over 3 years ago

Sweet and well done. Thank you

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Wish I'd Continued To Believe In Elves

A great story full of detail. A little surprised that shy Liam seemed to know exactly what to do once he got started but it's a fairy tale so hardly important. Well structured and written, deserving of a higher rating.

GinloverGinloverover 3 years ago

A brilliant well written story, you had me grinning from start to end. Thank you for sharing this.

Saxons08Saxons08over 3 years ago

Great and entertaining story. Very funny

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 3 years ago
Brilliant

Completely entertaining and light. I loved it. 5* all the way (sung to the tune of jingle bells). I keep wanting to write in the humor category, but it takes a special talent to do it this well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

What a Great read, I only wish i had read it at Christmas, but I will this Year. Thanks Once again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My 1st foray into this genre. A very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow! Who knew elf’s could be so naughty! What a delightful story. Top Marks and thank you for sharing.

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