by TarnishedPenny
Wow that was a lot of fun. So little to do with Christmas yet completely captured what I felt it should be about.
...and like Santa, she delivers on Christmas!
Trixie was the PERFECT representation of one of Santa's elves! Thinking Glenlivet was third-rate alcohol made me laugh out loud.
The opening scene with Judge Santa was one of the funniest things I've ever read. A great story the whole way through. ☆☆☆☆☆
Insanely hot and yet sweet at the same time. Liam and Sandy were adorable and I liked this elf a lot more than the one Will Ferrell portrayed (disclaimer: couldn't stomach the movie Elf, but would be happy to watch these characters in a movie).
The pace of the climatic scene was absolutely perfect; not too fast or too slow. Kudos on killing it on the humor and sexy fronts, while still keeping it sweet and sensitive. I should be used to it by now, but I still get surprised by how good the writing can get on Literotica, whether we have to pay for it or not.
The mix of humor and sex was wonderful. Great story. 5 stars! And Omerlon cleaning toilets, the only thing better than an airport would have been the bus station.
I just loved it. Merry Christmas!
As always, thank you for writing it, and thank you for sharing.
A great story full of detail. A little surprised that shy Liam seemed to know exactly what to do once he got started but it's a fairy tale so hardly important. Well structured and written, deserving of a higher rating.
A brilliant well written story, you had me grinning from start to end. Thank you for sharing this.
Completely entertaining and light. I loved it. 5* all the way (sung to the tune of jingle bells). I keep wanting to write in the humor category, but it takes a special talent to do it this well.
What a Great read, I only wish i had read it at Christmas, but I will this Year. Thanks Once again.
Wow! Who knew elf’s could be so naughty! What a delightful story. Top Marks and thank you for sharing.