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Anonymousover 4 years agoBad grammar makes stories difficult to read
You keep switching between present and past tense. And, the word is 'utter'.
Anonymousover 4 years agoPossible Promise
Not a bad idea, but ... it sounds a lot like what an eighth grade student might write. Read more and try to copy the styles of the best writers.
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