All Comments on 'Santa's Lap'

Excellent! More please.

Great first story! Hope to hear more from you.

What a sweet, innocent story for Christmas day.

Cute story. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

Finding it hard to read,,, too many typos. Relived instead of relieved, generic vs genetic... please edit.

Great story, love the characters and dialogue. Hope there's a part 2 soon!

Agreed about typos. "Generic" is not the same as "genetic", to name just one.

I apologize for the typos, I’ll be fixing that, and thank you for feedback! :)

Such a cute and sexy story! I hope to see more from you. Adding you to my favorites!

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Very Kawaii und Romantique!

11/10 Santa Breads!!!!!

"I looked at him and reached out for his necklace. He smirked. 'This looks good on you.'" Smirk doesn't mean what you think it means. From dictionary.com: "What does smirk mean? A smirk is a kind of smile, but it's not a friendly smile—it's often a sarcastic or arrogant one or one that's intended to provoke or irritate the person who sees it. Smirk is also a verb that means to smile in such a way." It has a negative connotation. It's used A LOT on this site, and almost every usage is in error.

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This is such a sweet and erotic story. Well done.