All Comments on 'Santa's Little Helpers'

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MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 1 year ago

Funny is hard. Good job!

8ikm8ikmover 1 year ago

Santa is such a lucky guy \⁠0⁠/

TruthwithaTwistTruthwithaTwistover 1 year ago

Fun story! Just give it a better proof - lots of little typos. Still 5* though!

MyBareTorsoMyBareTorsoover 1 year ago

That was absolutely fucking nuts...in the best possible way! Highly imaginative set-up, good characters, hilarious dialogue and truly inspired debauchery! Santa will be very good to you this year for writing such a cracker of a story. Great story, and thanks for taking the time to entertain us all. 🙏🎅🎄❄️😂

Crusader235Crusader235over 1 year ago

Wow Hot fun story. After reading I immediately went in search of Spit Roast porn. Five stars in spite of mistakes. Fun read, and thank you for it.

dmallorddmallordover 1 year ago

Hilarious tale! Though a bit tooooooo much on the overly descriptive sex acts. Shorter would have been better. Still it's worthy of the best marks.

This one really hit the winter theme ... nailed it very well.

AnonymousAnonymous24 days ago

A sort of entertaining read that is certainly a weird tale that took a lot of erotic imagination to write. As a story goes, it accomplished that even if we didn’t think much of it and didn’t enjoy it.

We are sure many others were into the story getting off on it, but different strokes for different folks!

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I write in a fantasy universe where STD's aren't a concern and birth control works every time, where most people are intelligent, respectful, and well adjusted, where 18 or 20 year olds can be both sweetly innocent and wise beyond their years. and where older people are open t...