by intim8
Fun story! Just give it a better proof - lots of little typos. Still 5* though!
That was absolutely fucking nuts...in the best possible way! Highly imaginative set-up, good characters, hilarious dialogue and truly inspired debauchery! Santa will be very good to you this year for writing such a cracker of a story. Great story, and thanks for taking the time to entertain us all. 🙏🎅🎄❄️😂
Wow Hot fun story. After reading I immediately went in search of Spit Roast porn. Five stars in spite of mistakes. Fun read, and thank you for it.
Hilarious tale! Though a bit tooooooo much on the overly descriptive sex acts. Shorter would have been better. Still it's worthy of the best marks.
This one really hit the winter theme ... nailed it very well.
A sort of entertaining read that is certainly a weird tale that took a lot of erotic imagination to write. As a story goes, it accomplished that even if we didn’t think much of it and didn’t enjoy it.
We are sure many others were into the story getting off on it, but different strokes for different folks!