All Comments on 'Sappho Family'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
wow!

please finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
amazing

this story made me rethink my sexual encounters for life....i love you! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Hot!

Very hot story hope theres another chapter cumming

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good story so far but seems unfinished

That can't be the end of the story! LOL....what ultimately happened when the 4 of you got together?

bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
A sexy story

I really loved the story and the girls and Annie is so cute and so sexy to lets see more of the girls and annie i loved them.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More Details

Excellent writing, by far, but you should have put more detail into what they were doing, not just "I came several times". You should tell us about the orgasm, was she moaning or was she silent? Bucking or still? And for goodness' sake, don't build up to Rachel like that just for a lousy game of chicken! I think the sequel (please?) will be perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Mmm, yeah!

More please! This is a great START for a wonderful series of tales, I cannot wait 2 read what happened between you and little Rachel, either!

OMG, OMG, OMG! Please continue this story, Pretty please.

Your writing is superb, like your characters & their situations!

C'Mon, be a sport, huh?

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