All Comments on 'Sara and Her Family Ch. 02'

Live the story but why so short?

Your grammar is horrible. Missing periods and capitalizations after dialog where it's not supposed to be.

Yeah, I'm nit-picking, but it makes it distracting while reading. But then, the mindless bots that don't have an education don't give a hoot because they're illiterate.

grammer? who gives a shit, it's a fuck story you moron.

NINCOMPOOP AND SHORT UNFINISHED STORY!

We get that he is her brother. You don't need to say brother every 3 seconds. It ruins the mood. Not only that, this story was way to short to build up any heat.

Chapter 2 was worst than the first. Is this going to be the pattern for the whole series?

Yes I to love to feel daddys cock inside my wet pussy and feel his spunk shoot inside my wet pussy so I got my little brother to do the same god did I cum over his hard cock

Looking forward to the afternoon.

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