by Awesome_Tom
Great story but to short. These 4 chapters should have been one chapter. You're great at teasing the reader, but the reader will only take so much before saying fuck it.
What's up with all the shaving? What's wrong with a little pubic hair, especially on a virile and masculine man? I had hoped for a description of dad's hairy chest, but now Sara wants him to shave around his cock. These shaven and waxed guys don't look natural!
The father should be grateful that Sara didn't piss in his mouth. I think this is the last chapter in this series that I'm going to read. I don't really care what happens at the family meeting.