All Comments on 'Sara Learns'

Cold, clinical, aloof - perhaps written by an AutoWriter, such as they use for first drafts of sitcoms?

Im glad U stated that U were not a writer, but practice makes you better. Turning Sara into Ur sexual sub should be interesting...Satyr

I think the story line has a lot of potential. If/when you turn this plot synopsis into a story, I hope you'll do it more sequentially, and spend a LOT of time on the psychological breaking of Sara. Have fun with it, and I hope to read it soon!

Good start, write more and your style will improve/

Wait - What?

Sara dressed a certain way so she brought this upon herself?

Is Lisa getting a pass because she is a woman?

If Lisa were Larry this would make the 6 o'clock news as a crime segment.

Horrible premise.