All Comments on 'Sara Stops By'

...........between prostate and prostrate. The rest of the story was rubbish too.

It wasn't rubbish.

But you need an editor to help with contractions and possessive punctuation.

On toast it's 'jam' on the door it's 'jamb' - just sayin'.

(And I think I'll go visit my stepfather this weekend.)

Still a good story and it developed quickly and nicely. (I sure do hope the critics don't grade me on my comments, lol.) Anyway, would like to see you continue the story since I think it has a lot of potential.

I agree with horney47, people tend to act like you are writing this for some publication or something. If that were the case, they would have a proofreader. Can't they just follow the story? I thought it was pretty good, but too short, it needed to continue on, into the bedroom, until the storm hit, and then another chapter after about cleaning up, and the time spent together while crews tried to clear the roads, etc.