All Comments on 'Sarah and Ben Ch. 01'

Like your other stories both of us enjoyed it. I know Rick my husband did as his cock was rock hard as I read it to him and after wards *S*. Ben will soon be like Rick in that he enjoys watching as Sarah is getting fucked just like Rick does with me.

tessia

Story line is inconsistant. It was said that she had been doing these parties for quite some time and coming home tired often. He stopped asking questions to soon. It's hard to believe she did it only once. This story gives all the feel of a husband being set up and diverted or deflected from finding out the whole story. Encouraged to let his own lust to get him to accept his wife's infedelity. Maybe deflect from finding out wife is for some time into prositution. Seems like much is being hidden.

Its a wonder sarah isnt facing the divorce court because Ben loves sarah so much and june didnt get punched in the mouth for lying to sarah about her husband .

Pat .

wimp...Wimp...WImp...WIMp...WIMP...He should have kicked her ass to the curb the first night she went to her job...

cukold bastard that gets off on his wife having sex with other men. What kind of a dad is he...I'll tell you he is a perverted lo class motherfucker. When will he try and get his little girl to have sex with old dirty hoboes so he can wank his pitiful little cum coated pecker. He would be better off dead...I'll do the honors ,arriedwithballs@yahoo.com

fucked up in his head. or married with balls is the name of the wife in the marriage. dim wit is the name of the husband.

( I may have been to blame for the pain, since I did not know that we should have used lubricant and I should have been gentler than I was. I had been too excited by the act and pushed to hard, to fast.) Meaning the dolt was a typical young male drippy dicked cum in two seconds weirdo

Has this writer ever written any story where the male is not a wimp? I read two stories or rather skimmed them and all are in the same vein

Too stupid for words.

The husband gives new meaning to the word wimp!

what a fucking pussy, i stopped reading about the time he got an erection from hearing his wife cheated on him. no man thinks like this, this is some stupid woman's fantasy about men who have no backbones.

pathetic.

Yuck

IT MIGHT WORK FOR A WHILE...UNTIL THE SHIT HITS THE FAN

Any wife that would do that needs to get AIDS and die a slow lonely death and any husband who would take a slut like that back deserves to get AIDS with her

CHRIST!!!!!! I can't believe how many of these stories are getting to be wimpy fag garbage!

the idea that any normal man would want to be around either of them is stupid.

This chapter is bad enough but the fact that you went on to write another 4 chapters amkes me want to not live on this planet anymore.

Mayans do your thing and end this failed experiment

That shit I do not tolerate. I know that crap like this really happens but I don't even like to read about it. I did not give you a grade, I just left it off. I usually express my opinions verbally. I just won't read any more of your stuff.

same old curious.. same wimpy cuckolded, pathetic husbands smh. I know its just a story but atleast make it believable.. she had a gangbang with 15 men and he does nothing?????

I wish these ass-holes would all kill themselves and make this world a better place!

What a crock of shit

of freakin bullshit! He's a complete and utter wimp. Sarah is a complete slut. June is a manipulative and selfish whore! I have to go take a shower and brush my teeth multiple times to get this crap off of me!

die, wimp author.

The story had a lot of twists and more than enough confusing points. This line in the story was delusional at best. I don't normally have negative comments to free stories so I will stop here (-1*)

You are a very poor writer. Even for a freebie, this is really badly written with non-existent characterization, a truly absurd plotline and a style that can charitably called pedestrian at best. I would strongly suggest you give up writing as a hobby as your talent level (or lack therein) is embarrassing for all concerned.

Heraclites

I was with you until the husband got a boner and then I had to fight to hold down the vomit that was trying to force its way up my gullet! Not my cup of tea and I'm mad as hell because I wasted my time reading this story just to be stopped abruptly over some gross shit!

A shame this turned into garbage, yet another cuckold story apparently.

I liked Ben in the beginning, until I learned that he was one of those degenerates that gets off on his wife fucking other men.

There isn't a REAL MAN in this world that wants to see his wife gang banged! You really are an -wipe!

Bullshit bullshit bullshit bullshit gag me.

You left reality so far behind that they should call you Han Solo. Did this help you? This is the junk food section of the food court known as Loving Wives.

Not much more to say. The sex scenes were okish but the story line was just too silly for words.

Her excuse for cheating makes no sense since you never even brought that into the reader's consciousness before. 45 fucks? This goes beyond fantasy into basically a joke. Worst part is the story starts out okay and then goes full on contrived bullshit - and not because the husband is an unbelievable wimp or wife unbelievable slut. I couldn't read further than page 2.

This idiot's writing gets worse and worse, does he have a drinking problem?

your pen name is referring your being Curious2C if you make it past age 21.Personally I doubt it no matter how many years you breathe.

Safe sex. Sarah had 15 men 3x each unprotected. At that point Ben should have no open contact - not oral, not even an open-mouthed kiss - until she has a clean bill of health.

Also, somehow i think they haven’t shared the whole truth. Sarah’s job wouldn’t include private parties unless she’d already been stripping, probably also giving blowjobs. Also, June isn’t much of a friend if she sold still photos and recorded a video.

Bleech. Wanting to watch your wife get gangbanged? accepting it? Not palatable.

What a load of pathetic shit, you really make your male characters weak wimps. What real man enjoys the thought of his love being gangbanged? What pathetic wimp thinks that’s ok?

No one does. This is nothing but cheap shit cuck fantasy bullshit.

You must qualify as one of the worst authors here.

1/5

SUCKSUCKSUCKS!

I STOPPED READING BEFORE I GOT TO PAGE TWO.

WHAT A PERVERSE SLUT AND A SPINELESS CUCKHOLD!

ANOTHER WRITER I AM DONE WITH...

While there are unrealistic aspects to this story, I can believe other aspects of this story could occur and reoccur.

zerozerozero, yeah, it's me again.

WHAT A BUNCH OF SCUM-SUCKING DOGS.

Who comes up with this crap