All Comments on 'Sarah Looses a Bet'

Find an editor! Why should I waste my time on your story if you can't be bothered to get even the title right?

Lost me before the end of the first paragraph. Owning a Rolex worth $5K, making wagers like that and not able to afford to fix that car? Unbelievable. I don't mind suspending belief for a bit, but this one is beyond the pale.

Then get a much better storyline.

You managed to pack quite a lot into a short story, really enjoyed it.

Seen all this before, better handled, by other authors. And I agree. Can't you fucking spell? It's "Loses" not "Loose's."

It seems like I have similar fantasies, unfortunately I am overweight ( ok.. fat) and I need to lose some weight before I could be a good sissy, but I still love getting off to fantasies of a woman making me into her sissy slut and making me suck cock, get fucked and lick her cum filled pussy.

I for one enjoyed the story. I come here for fantasy and you hit on one of mine! Oh how I would love to serve dressed as a french maid and then used as a party favor!