All Comments on 'Sarah Loses a Bet'

If you want to write a story finish it,,,soft cock story

Yuck. What is it a it you guys and over 10 inches of cock? Utterly ridiculous. Very pitiful story. No development lame sex useless dialogue. PLUS if she just swallowed why the condoms?

Pitiful little star

ButterflyGal

I hope there are more parts to this. Sarah seems nicely submissive to me. Nice to think this could carry on into the Festive period.

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhabited sex.

It went from a Blow job to all the sudden ,she's counting condoms?? They didn't say fucking.. but I hope chapter 2 has lots and lots of fucking, even without condoms.. maybe have Sarah lose the leggings and have actual nylons on her legs, too spice it up

Kind of feels like the author is overcompensating. Please do some research on average penis length before trying to write a story like this. Also, "girth" is the width around the penis, not the length, which wouldn't really have as much to do with its length.

Even if there were further chapters (there should not be further chapters) I would not read them.

Why is it that there are always comments complaining about dick size? 10 inch dicks exist. Quit whining about it when they show up in a story. And a few people complaining because she ran off to make sure she had condoms after swallowing... clearly she's interested in more than just oral next time. It's not even veiled foreshadowing. The only way they author could have made it more clear is if he explicitly said she counted them to make sure she had enough to really enjoy the weekend fucking her brother.

Overall, this is a well written intro to setup additional chapters and I hope to read them. I just hope I don't see as many stupid comments.

I have to say that this was well written, at least i think so, my only complaint was the length of the story as I got hooked and it was over too soon. I still do not understand why there are complaints on the size of the brother and accusing the author of over compensating. To me those complaining on his size are nothing more than size queens and jealous that this story was well put out and had a serious thought put into it from start to finish

Sure it's short, but sometimes I like a snack instead of a banquet.

Please keep going.

Can’t wait to see the next chapter you should describe how the sister look. It a great first chapter that get read hook for more. Please update soon