All Comments on 'Sarah Shows Up Naked'

by qaz2001

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bigbob2406bigbob2406about 6 years ago

Why would you write more of this pathetic drivel??

FASfanFASfanabout 6 years ago
To bigbob2406

So you didn't like this story; I did. One man's trash is another man's treasure as they say. Nice start, and please bring us Part Two soon. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Block the troll

That escalated quickly! But seriously great story, can't wait to read more of your work. Also ignore the trolls, they are morons.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Amazing! 5/5 stars only because there aren't more stars to go higher with.

Amazing story

--extremely mild spoiler warning--

Is not hugely long, go read before you go further here

Best lines - Shawn's yes in response to craig:'s "you know I'm gonna fuck her, right?"

Sarah's "I'm sorry" as she drips ass cum onto the face of her ex-love.

The little things are what make it great

MisterDegenerateMisterDegenerateabout 6 years ago

I enjoyed the story bud, don't listen to people hating on ya cause they don't like cuck/ntr material. I see alot of that. ragers gonna rage. hope you write more, laters.

uticaslaveuticaslaveabout 6 years ago
Excellent and Hot Writing

Very professional writing and a very hot subject. People who are not into this kink should just find something else to read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Don't let the complainers discourage you. They probably voted for Trump! Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Really well done, excited for the next installment

permanaturalpermanaturalalmost 6 years ago

Not sure how easy it is to change tags, but you want "betrayal"

j1greenej1greeneover 5 years ago
Looking for Chapter 2

She needs to go to a frat party or other large party naked.

Horny4hentaiHorny4hentaiabout 3 years ago

Amazing story. Hope you write more like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is my favorite story on this website, I’d kill for a part 2

fifarafa15fifarafa15about 2 years ago

nice one, hope part 2 follow soon

Dklover56Dklover566 months ago

Thanks for writing this story I really enjoyed reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Geat premise, but went the wrong way. Should be in the BDSM category.

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